had to view that one on youtube as my pc is having trouble with this flash (too graphic extend i guess), but it was really worth it.
i am amazed how much details you put into one single frame. especially the animations and drawings of the water is so great, i would give you a 10/10 for that alone!
the rest of the animations is great, too. very fluent and very detailed.
i think words just can't express how much i love this flash! :)
the voice was done in a very good way. but sadly the rest wasn't.
there were just tweening gifs and some text on a black background. no real graphics (except for the credit card which looked decent) and no animations .
but still i have to say that you did a somewhat good job on spoofing that commercial, even though the presentation lacks a lot of quality.
if you'd put some animations and an other background as just the black wall in it, it would have been much better.
that was a lame attempt at creating a flash.
it was just a gif with a strange moving mouth as the only animation and the cookie monster singing in the background.
speaking of "background". you didn't had any background graphics, just a plain white screen. that looks quite bad and only emphasizes the impression that you didn't put much effort into this.
next time, try to create some more animations and some background graphics.
it's just a picture i can "shoot" at and bullet holes will just appear in set locations (some spots in the face, nothing else).
at least provide the player with various hit zones, so that it will be more fun "shooting" the picture.
this could have been a funny little game and the idea of combining a "tamagotchi" with this "pick your death" theme is quite an original one.
but sadly you didn't put much effort into this.
first of all: one could only choose between three different weapons. that's just not enough; hardly one minute goes by until one has seen them all twice.
then: the blood looked really bad. and pikachu looked all the same, doesn't matter if i stab him or pour some acid above his head. he still looks unharmed, but all of a sudden there are a few red circles on the screen.
the only weapon you did put at least some effort in was the junk press. here you at least changed the pasted image of pikachu.
if you had put the same effortin into the other two weapons, this would get a much higher score.
i think this was a good attempt at a parody.
the graphics did look like the original netscape browser and i liked how you created the impression that those pages were actually loading.
but unfortuneatly there wasn't much else to do once you visited all of the pages.
most of the buttons didn't work and even more did bring up an error message. if you had added more content to this game i am sure that you would've gotten a much higher score.
Na da sag ich doch mal Danke sehr! :)
Rock on! \m/
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