had to view that one on youtube as my pc is having trouble with this flash (too graphic extend i guess), but it was really worth it.
i am amazed how much details you put into one single frame. especially the animations and drawings of the water is so great, i would give you a 10/10 for that alone!
the rest of the animations is great, too. very fluent and very detailed.
i think words just can't express how much i love this flash! :)
the voice was done in a very good way. but sadly the rest wasn't.
there were just tweening gifs and some text on a black background. no real graphics (except for the credit card which looked decent) and no animations .
but still i have to say that you did a somewhat good job on spoofing that commercial, even though the presentation lacks a lot of quality.
if you'd put some animations and an other background as just the black wall in it, it would have been much better.
that was a lame attempt at creating a flash.
it was just a gif with a strange moving mouth as the only animation and the cookie monster singing in the background.
speaking of "background". you didn't had any background graphics, just a plain white screen. that looks quite bad and only emphasizes the impression that you didn't put much effort into this.
next time, try to create some more animations and some background graphics.
seriously, put a lot more effort into your flashes. this was just a simple gif with a lousy animation.
it definetly needs more than that to create decent flashes. why not try and use your talent to create good flashes, for a change? just think of a good storyline and then put some effort into your drawings and animations...
it was mildly funny. what hurt this flash the most is the fact, that all voices sounded the same. try to get some friends of yours to help you out next time.
also, the quality of the images were quite low. try to find some better pictures with a higher quality.
what's up with those weird colors for the textboxes? just use simple white boxes with black text in it. no need to color them in about 3 million different colors.
anyway, to the flash: the graphics were just bad, even back then. put more effort into creating your characters, so that they don't look like a circle and a rectangle mixed together.
you also have to work on your animations. this looked more of a picture slideshow than like fluent anymations. add more frames and try to create fluent movements.
the story was also lame, but this is just a matter of taste, i guess. but try to be more original.
the humour was decent in this flash. i liked how you not just simply made some lame "pothead jokes" but added a different story line to this.
the music was quite funny, but why wasn't there any in the last scene? and why were the textboxes gone so fast? it made it really difficult to follow the plot.
the graphics look decent, but the animations are just too simple (even back then those animations didn't look that great).
as a final remark it can be said, that this movie was way too short! make it longer, with even more (and even better!) jokes! :)
i liked the fact that you had a plot line - even though the plot is quite random and very weird - and even added voices to this. although those were sometimes a bit difficult to understand.
the graphics aren't that bad, but they aren't good either. the characters are basically "pimped stickmen" with low quality gifs as heads. if you had put some more effort into your drawings, this flash would get a much higher rating, i think.
while the characters looked quite nice the lack of background was just annoying. if you had put a bit more effort into this, you could have created a pretty good movie.
also, this whole thing was running too fast. i could read what those guys were saying as the text bubbles were gone in the fraction of a second.
furthermore, the lack of sound hurt the movie as well. you could have added at least some music. voice acting would have been even better. this way you vcould've also solved the problem with the too fast text.
you had some nice drawings and a very funny plot in this one.
sadly, you didn't put that much effort into this. the "walking picture" was just lame. but maybe it was just part of the joke.
also, the voice acting wasn't that good. turn your mic down when recording voices, that way it doesn't sound as if the boxes blow up any second.
oh, and i liked the music you used at the end.
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