meh
the good:
the graphics were ok. at least you didn't use some plain sticks.
the bad:
the animations seemed a bit stiffy. looked like those guys were moving in stop motion. the voice acting wasn't that good, either. i hardly couldn't understand a thing.
the ugly:
don't move the mic so close to your mouth when recording your voice. that way you will avoid that sounds like "k" or "p" sound so hard.