meh
the good:
very nice graphics and great animations. The voice acting is very good, too.
the story itself is both: senseless and yet so awesome! :)
the bad:
sometimes the room for the subtitles isn't enough to show it all. so one is left with just half the sentence.
the ugly:
very interesting flash you created here. i like the kinda senseless story.
and maybe you can fix the problem with the subtitles, that would be great ;) .